Simple Sales Copy Re-write

Simple Sales Copy Re-write
Hello –

We need an immediate sales copy re-write. Very basic!
We are converting our MLM affiliate program to a 1 level
affiliate program. We also want some features highlighted
a bit more.

I will do the basic editing and pass onto you for polishing.
We need this done ASAP.

Thanks.

p.s. Must have good feedback & portfolio!