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Description of the track:
This song came to my head when someone told me that I could change the world and I could do nothing to save it. I really don’t believe that sentence, since it is a self defeating thought, so I changed it. The true change starts within, and sometimes it can spread to the world.
Artist’s website: inmyths.com
Lyrics:
You’re not going to change it
Unless
You change yourself
And let it change
You’re not going to amend the world
You’re not going to rescue it
Unless
You can change yourself
Let it change again
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