This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. What useful feedback can you give the artist? The floor is yours to talk about the track and how they can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.
Download audio file (15667843_hold_the_sky_even_longer.mp3)
Description of the track:
Playing with trap and ambient elements. Very interesting texture. I call it Float Hop. Maybe there is another genre name for it? Not sure. Would love technical feedback. Where to compress, where to add/take off reverb, etc.
Artist’s website: soundcloud.com/patrick-rawson/hold-the-sky-even-longer
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Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section. Feel free to offer any type of advice – arrangement, mix, lyrics, performance. And remember to play nice – be constructive!
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