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Description of the track:
A soulful sounding song with emotions that can make you reevaluate your life.
Lyrics:
nobody knows what way to go in life
which path is wrong or right
nobody knows
nobody knows why do the children die
why do we question why
nobody knows
(Massakre)
nobody knows am I dealing with my friends or my foes?
take a look around everywhere I go
cosmic flow free my mind and roll
people everywhere live and breathe in fear
let the light in and the darkness clears
take a look around everywhere I go
lay my head low cause nobody knows
(Sista Shrub)
nobody knows
nobody knows i said
nobody knows which way to go
nobody knows
nobody knows
which way to go which way to go
which way to go which way to go
(K-Yo)
nobody knows if theyre going to heaven or hell
we breathing living dying crying we just might as well
live out our lives to the fullest we just might as well
live out our lives to the fullest its so hard to tell
if this day could be your last get fucked up by the gun gun blast situations time has passed
so laugh at the past and looks towards the future
life will get better in a few im sure
(Kombat)
nobody knows why the world is spinning
evil people grinning with children missing
and nobody knows why nobody knows why
the angels cry as they sit up in the sky
nobody knows bloody fingers and toes
hoes selling that nookie for the steady bank roll
shes selling that cookie for the money cash flow
better grab my hand its time to go
(Sista Shrub)
nobody knows nobody knows nobody knows
which way to go
god only knows god only knows I said god only knows
which way to go
(Massakre)
god only knows
will i survive
god only knows
why we’re alive
god only knows
why the sea levels rise
please humans open eyes
im a follower of the universal power of love
and when viewed from above
you can see its really all simple
everything is really so simple
cause God only knows and thats the way it should be
the path is ours to chose what it would be
bless us with ya presence and shed repentance upon my next sentence
youre the number one thing that this world is missing
nobody knows cause nobody wanna listen
but I try
(Kombat)
knows nobody
knows my name
everybody in the world feels my pain
dont care if youre rich or care if youre poor
either way time comes and youre knocking heavens door bell
or hell oh well i guess
i could try again
close my book lose my friends my times spent now im dead
only God knows where I am only God knows where I am
I just wanna keep my family they be loving me
like the world we be hugging trees
God put that green on this earth
so we pick it up on our knees oh it hurts
God thank you thank you thank you
God thank you thank you thank you
(K-Yo)
and I really dont get it I just live it day to day
its a struggle in my life but i love it so i pray
I pray
pray for my children everyday
and i really dont get it I just live it day to day as I hustle through my life we’ll see what happens in this game
this game, nobody knows but we feel the pain
God only knows but we feel the pain
God only knows but we feel the pain
God only knows but we feel the pain
and thats the way it should be
Artist’s website: facebook.com/nocturnalninjas
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