Workshop #104: New Sunshine by Dj Van

At Audiotuts+ we irregularly put up a reader track for workshopping and critique (find out how to submit a track). This is how it works: you upload your song, and every week or so we’ll publish one here and step away from the podium. The floor is yours to talk about the track and how the artist can fix problems in and improve upon the mix and the song.

This track has been submitted for your friendly, constructive criticism. They have put their track (and their heart and soul) in your hands to learn and get useful feedback.

  • Do you enjoy the song or track itself? Does it have potential?
  • Can the arrangement be improved?
  • How did you find the mix? What would you do differently?
  • What do you enjoy about the rhythm track? What can be done to improve it?
  • Is the choice of instruments relevant and effective for the style/song?
  • Are the lyrics (if any) effective? Does the style, arrangement and genre of the song suit them?
  • Can you suggest any specific techniques that might improve the track?
  • Do you have any other constructive feedback?

New Sunshine by Dj Van

Artist’s website: www.doremusica.com/Sitio_web/Bienvenida

Description of the track:

This song is the first single for my electronic producer career. I’m the composer and the producer and the voice is from a friend and she performed it for my production. Thanks a lot. The text is based on the Bible 2 Corinthians 5:17.

Download audio file (NewSunshineFt.Angela2Co517.mp3)

Terms of Use: Users can stream the track for the purposes of giving feedback but cannot download or redistribute it.

Have a listen to the track and offer your constructive criticism for this Workshop in the comments section.

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Experienced Php Programmer Needed – 5 Hrs

Hello,

We need to finish up my simple php site.

1) Add few images and flash menus to the site and to make sure pages are correctly displayed.
2) We have our service estimator which was written by different programmer and it’s not finished.
3) All pages must pass all w3c validations; site must look the same on all major browsers.

Broswer Issues With Ie

We have developed a couple of sites for a client, both created through WordPress using the multisites feature. (images are provided in attachments with URLs)

There are a couple of problems that only seem to happen in IE

1) Flash videos are not showing. On my IE8, I cannot see the homepage flash banners, but others seem ok. But client says he can’t see other ones as well

2) The home links don’t work in IE.

Please visit the site, and have a look to make sure you can do the work required. Would like this to be fixed today as soon as possible.

Thanks.

Graphic Designer Needed Asap

I need a page recreated into html and psd source files. Our designer has not shown up to finish this project in over a week. I am no longer able to wait.

Here is the page he has done that I need redone in psd.
http://www.dsignfx.net/gfe/main.html The sad thing is this page is nearly complete. It is the index for the new site design and critical to our design process. However it has a few corrections that were needed that have not been done yet:

I need the fonts corrected on the page they should be uniform …right now we had many experimental fonts. I will provide you with all fonts.

Also the background image is incorrect. The dragon should be inversed and the background color must be corrected. Also I would like more shadowing added to the page so it pops off the background a bit more than it does.

The bottom twitter bar is transparent and that must be made solid.

The buttons must be recolored I have the source files for those images. This should be done fairly quickly..Obviously the designer I choose will help me finish this project which is HUGE.

I will provide you with all images and a lot of the source files that I have from the designer..I will need a full page psd document from you and the the html source files.

DO NOT BID IF:

You have less than 10 feedback.
You intend on Spamming my message board with a lot of links to templates
You do not want to take 50% SL Escrow & 50% upon completion.

DO BID IF:
You have a creative portfolio and a creative website.
You are a professional hardworking CREATIVE person. If you cant work US hours or your not available at least 5 days a week please do not bid on my project.
This project does not require any creative works its just about done and planned however I will require creative inputs for future pages.

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I need someone that can pick the comps do data entry do adjustments, enter the pictures and additional attachments. I need it on time and be able to work on weekends and during my time. I am willing to pay between $5 to $8 per BPO… (Budget: $30-250, Jobs: BPO, Data Entry, Data Processing, Order Processing, Virtual Assistant)


illustrator/cartoonist for big online game by Yourgrafix

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