Small Copywriting Edit
I currently have a 859 word script that is supposed to quickly explain the importance, value and benefits of drinking a unique potentiated form of alkaline water. It can and needs to be shortened.
It is for a recorded message and should heat prospects up to the point that they will take the next step and place an order.
It definitely can be improved and I’d like a proven copywriter to ramp it up accordingly.
If you have worked with water or health/health products this will be a walk in the park.
I trust we’ll be talking soon
HGP