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Joseph and Fares Gessese are entrepreneurs from Ethiopia. During the summer of 2000 Joseph and Fares Gessese decided to move from Washington, DC area to Fort Wayne, IN to become successful entrepreneurs. In Fort Wayne, IN, the brothers didn’t idle away their precious time; instead they utilized it for gathering further knowledge about becoming able entrepreneurs. They were frequent visitors of the local library and from there they devoured very many books connected with entrepreneurship. After months long research they decided to float their first business. They started their own carpet cleaning business, with the main stress on the low income families. Slowly they began to grow and moved to Columbus, with a view of expanding their growing business. By hard work and sincerity they were really successful and became the founders of African Midwest Yellow Pages, African Cup USA and also started to function as the franchisee of the 4th largest tax service of America in Manhattan, NY.
In May 2010, Joseph and Fares moved back to Washington DC area and founded DMVStars.com to highlight the stars in DC, MD, and VA. They wanted to connect the DMV Stars with their fans. DMVStars.com allows their fans to vote for their favorite DMV star. DMVstars.com also helps the upcoming artist in DMV by giving them a platform to show case their talents. Fares says, “I felt like DMV needs to know “who is who” in our community and DMVStars.com does exactly that.” The brothers say that they are obliged to giving back to the community they grow up in.
