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Description of the track:
This track came out pretty easily. It’s a traditional electronic pop song with quite simple structure. It starts lightly but gets heavier and heavier. Or at least it’s supposed to…
The song was recorded in FL Studio. All instruments are VST’s, vocals were recorded with the A.I.R BLACK BULLET condenser microphone using M-Audio Fast Track Pro as an audio interface.
Artist’s website: soundcloud.com/msrbl
Lyrics:
they’ve got a god
they’ve got a soul
they’ve got everything
but they don’t love you.
they’ve got a role
and such a big f***ing hole
inside of their hearts
cause they don’t love you
where do we find a cause for our love?
why do we need a cause for our love?
they’ve got a goal
achievements and a whole
world in their hands
but they don’t love you.
they are coming back
the sky is getting black
like their ruined hearts
because they don’t love you.
where do we find a cause for our love?
why do we need a cause for our love?
cause nothing in this world is as precious as your smile
cause nothing in this world is as precious as you.
where do we find a cause for our love?
why do we need a cause for our love?
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confide in me, they won’t reach you
they won’t get you, they won’t hurt you.
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where do we find a cause for our love?
why do we need a cause for our love?
cause nothing in this world is as precious as your smile
cause nothing in this world is as precious as you.
where do we find a cause for our love?
why do we need a cause for our love?
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